New Idea

I arranged a meeting with Leonie to have a chat and see what I should and can build on in my final film, possibly change and work more at. After speaking to Leonie Iv changed the story line but kept the same message  about a woman sort of being a slave to her husband, but its going to be more of a domestic abuse type story line  where there will just be scene after scene of him in her face, shouting etc, and you see in their shadows and things the abuse, so its kind of hidden, because I don't want to actually show any physical abuse. The female character is kind of going to have a voice over, throughout the film, saying how she is feeling. This is the rough storyboard: